We had such a fun time with this one! We're planning on replaying it after the jam's over too! 5 stars all around!
Reminds me of the the fun flash games from AddictingGames or Kongregate.
It was a small thing, but during the locker search, I really liked running over to the dialogue box to catch what the narrator was saying about each item. Like the narrator was truly driving the story and if I didn't keep up with them I'd miss out. It never got stale and it kept the pace + fun discoveries up the whole time! I also liked getting thrown into different situations while being caught in the middle of the narrator argument.
My suggestions would be similar to what everyone else said. To set the respawn for the robots vs dragons fight to the start of the fight. Or an option to skip the dialogue there. And also a little more generosity with the hitboxes.
From a marketing perspective, I think there're some things you could do to get more reviews and exposure. Tweaking the itch page to match the coloring of your game, making gifs with a gif making tool (like ScreenToGif) for the thumbnail and screenshots, and some more info in the description.
Amazing job to all who worked on this!
- Josh