I'm glad you took the courage and posted it! I love VNs so I'm glad you made a VN for this game jam. I saw you were nervous about reactions in the Level Up Circle server, but I enjoyed this game and I encourage you to keep making more games.
I loved that you tested the player's attention by asking questions about the investigation so I would not just click through everything but actually focus on the evidence. I didn't encounter any bugs and played through it all. Such a fun game!