I really hope you sell this on steam I'd buy the complete version on steam in a heartbeat. By the way really good writing and artwork. I cant decide my favorite, I love Darius's perverted nature and sense of humor/personality. But I am a gamer at heart so I relate better to Chester and he is a sweetheart once you get to know him. Coach Griff was absolutely and adorable and so sweet and lovable.
I liked Spencer and Dozer too but I find them harder to relate to. Still good characters and stories but I enjoyed the above characters more. Just my two cents.
Can't wait to see how you do Richard he seems like a more grown up and open Darius, I could imagine Darius being like him in a few years of growing. Keep up the good work I look forward to seeing your future work.