Really nice work! I dig the atmosphere and aside from a few misspellings, I really like this. I do suggest though to put somewhere in the description that it's a Twine game. Super well done, though!
Very happy to hear you're enjoying the game! If you know of any specific places where misspellings are, let me know and I'll make a point of running them down when I get the chance.
As for labeling the game as "twine" that actually appears in the tag cloud. ;)
