Ideas: 5/5, Art 4/5, Writing...
There are some logic errors, like the command about the recent building of the base but than there is so much space in it and the library looks fu.. huge but on the outside it looks like a little hut... If something is only a placeholder than better put a watermark on it.
Some of the conversations/ the reactions don't fit the situations rly well... like the first dinner or some overreactions/ statements in other conversations...
I like the Look of the vn and the ideas behind it + the lewd stuff works. But the writing needs some rework. Even me, a dude with a mäh English noticed that.
Just go over it and question all the reactions/commands of the characters + the stuff you explain/ show...
A promising vn I am looking forward 2 read more of and maybe even support...