This one caught me by surprise. The art looks really good, but the humor is probably not for everyone. I'm a bit unsure myself if I like it, the "chad/feminist/nerd" thoughts and the outragous things happening make me think of slapstick comedy anime, but without the slapstick? So it's not exactly a super serious vn, but it appears the plot is just starting so I can't know more until a few more updates. Will definitely follow though.
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Agree with the above comment. The writing definitely needs a bit of work. However, please don't go the same route as other VN's where many characters are written as the: "OMG, XD, I'M SO CUTESY AND RANDOM!" shtick which not only gets old pretty fast but is extremely annoying, at times feeling like a self-insert of the author?
That's a fair observation! I don't think that's the route I intend to go down, or at least not one I'd deliberately follow, but then again, no one sets out to write poorly on purpose. I mentioned it in a reply to the comment above, but some things will naturally change throughout the story, and some things won't. Everyone's mileage will vary, and if people like it, I'm glad to have them; and if they don't, I appreciate them giving it a try anyways!
I think these are valid concerns -- the humor's not for everyone, and possibly not even for a majority of people or anyone with taste. If it's not for you, that's okay! I can't guarantee it will get better or worse in the subsequent updates. Some things will change, and some things won't. Either way, I appreciate you giving it a shot.
Oh I don't think this is an issue of quality. The art is good, the writing is good, no spelling or grammar errors. It's just that It feels off, i'm half expecting this to be a dream of the main character because teachers giving dildos to take care off is not something even the most absurd anime do. I'm curious what others think of it. I'm sure it will be popular purely based on the art, so I won't have to wait long lol