Personally I feel like u are hating a little to much on MNF, u are right on some points but still. Personally I HATE the writing in sisterly lust. That is straight up trash, 2 out of 4 from the household looks terrible, so stop putting it on such a high pedestal, it ain't that great. MNF while lackluster at times in dialogue and animation, is far superior to SL. When re-reading your comment I can't really decide if it's satire or not, cause I cannot believe someone would think SL has brilliant dialouge. Well that's my take on this, I have been rambling to much so I'll just end it here...
oh yes, im hating on that game big time nowdays, after having spent a lot of time defending MNF from naysayers complaining about the incest, i gave a little feedback, as politely as possible, on how the dialogue was quite repetitive, with the same lines being used over and over again in each new update, just re-writes of the same conversations for what, 14 updates straight.. anyways, as a response, the dev decided i was only there to bitch about his game, banned me from his comment section, and deleted all my comments (except those defending his game). admin is a child, as you can tell from not only his reaction to feedback (notice how you cant see many negative comments on his thread, just look at how many deleted comments he has) but also in the quality (or lack thereof) his writing style.
but, thats totally besides the point and does not reflect on just how well written the dialogue is in this game, and the meaningful choices and quality renders given in SL, even if the writing style is also a bit childish (i see it more as playful, but with MNF, its straightup childish degeneracy and reliance on dime-a-dozen anime meme to fill his "story", with the MC being clinically diagnosable sociopath to top it all off.. and this opinion is coming from a major fictional-incest fan, i mean, theres a reason i started playing it in the first place, its not like i dont like that type of thing.
as for The Headmaster, well, thats just genius, the first ever well-written, funny, intelligent, and sexy game of its theme
Totally agree with you on your "headmaster" statement. And while what you are saying about MNF creator being childish and a dick, is kinda true. I do think u are being a little biased when comparing MNF and SL dialouge. While MNF's is repetetive, and mabye a little bland, SL fucking sucks. That is not childish, its cringe, and i was pretty close to quitting the game. Glad i didnt cause the story and characters is pretty interesting. But yeah, i get where u are coming from, but still feel like u are being a little to biased.
of course im being biased, this is not a scientific discussion at all lol, this is just my experienced opinion.. and its been a long time since i played SL, and i certainly cant remember instances of the dialogue, but what i do remember is that it was a higher quality game visually, and the story captured my attention and kept it, certainly it wasnt as well written as a masterpiece like dancing lessons, but certainly leagues ahead of MNF, which i wouldnt put in the same boat as either this game, or the headmaster, and that was really the only point i was trying to make here.
what i think the MNF author has done, is latched onto a certain handful of keywords, and looks to create situations where those keywords can be dropped. to be fair he is onto something in that regard, but after a few chapters, it really gets tiring, i think the exact words i used in my feedback was "it is becoming a chore to read", and he really flipped out at that.. hell, i was a paying subscriber up til he banned me