Thank you very much for playing even if its not your game style, I appreciate it a lot ! Thanks to Jesse Spillane, an amazing artist, I could have awesome musics that was so much in the style I wanted I was happy :) The dialogues are what takes me the most of the time in writing as there is dialogues for each cards, combo between cards, for upright and reversed one ! Thank you for reporting typo's ! If you remember some of them, could you tell me where they was ? (As i'm not a native english speaker, this is quite an exercice for me to write that much :D ). Thank you for your feedback !
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Hi, the pleasure was all mine playing your game was a fun experience.
I'm not a native english speaker myself but I'll try my best to write down the typos I came across.
- A lot of people with differents faces and differents questions comes to see me, more than usual.
- A lot of people with different faces and different questions come to see me, more than usual.
- Daniel, after the previous divination I finaly hoped I won't see you again.
- Daniel, after the previous divination I finally hoped I wouldn't see you again.
- Yes ! And I had your Lovers card then, why didn't I met anyone?
- Yes ! And I got your Lovers card then, why didn't I meet anyone?
- Even after all these years you don't listen to me it seems. The stars and I gives paths to questions,...
- Even after all these years you don't listen to me it seems. The stars and I give paths to questions,...
- ...That's written in my house door you just banged so hard to come in.
- That's written on my house door you just banged so hard to come in.
- Things have changed up here, a lot of people wants me to be...
- Things have changed up here, a lot of people want me to be...
- What the City want you to do, ...
- What the city wants you to do, ...
- If you were in my position you will see that ...
- If you were in my position you would see that ...
- Everything my family have built for centuries is here...
- Everything my family has built over the centuries is here...
- Wow ! Not an harch no?
- Wow ! Not a harsh no?
- We will see. Did you came for another purpose?
- We will see. Did you come for another purpose?
- I thought you were disapointed ...
- I thought you were disappointed...
- I won't really call that a gift...
- I wouldn't really call that a gift..
- You might want to choose carefuly...
- You might want to choose carefully...
These are the typos I found. I might've made some mistakes (sorry for that) I'm not a native english speaker myself.
This is how I wrote the typos down:
- the original text
- the correction
Once again great game, I hope to see more of it in the future.
With kind regards.