Yooooo I actually LOVE this. Interesting mechanics, dialog is AMAZING and the music is dope too!
I love how you intentionally made the opening dialog an eyesore. it's such a mess haha, but absolutely hilarious to read, and it gets so meta too!
Literally my only complaint is the dialog advancing sound is much louder than all the other sounds. Since that was the first sound after complete silence, it almost blew my ear drums off! xD Then after turning the volume way down, I turned it back up again to jam out to the music, then the dialog advance sound swung in for a second attack xD xD xD While that may have been intentional for this jam, I think it could be turned down a lil bit. Or maybe a lil warning, perhaps even in the dialog ("Press space to advance. Cover your ears :3 )
Aside from that... Amazing work.
now if you'll excuse me, back to figuring out level 5 :)
-Sasha