The composition and rhythmic elements are really interesting! I’m definitely getting lots of varied emotions from these shifting chords and unusual scales.
I think your production lets you down here a little – you spent so much time recording real guitars, but it’s hard to hear them clearly over the two louder, more ear-catching synth parts.
I’d love to hear you take another pass at this with fresh ears and see how much you can refine the overall sound – mixing metal is really tough at the best of times, but especially so when you’re on a super tight deadline!