That's a sweet entry 😉
Wacky and weird, it touches all the right cords for a neat arcade! It could be a modern Tapper kind of fun and even better with the right fixes and polish.
I crave for any sort of live feedback (and as a sucker for GMTK videos, I can't not suffer 😂). If the choice is to remove all "arcade" kind of feedback - like flashing points, live score and so on - (which is awesome), the art has the job to give a feedback:
- how full are the customers?
- e.g. face more and more bloated, or leaning more and more on the table
- how good are the pancakes served?
- e.g. customers leave a tip based on the quality
Also, the waiter portion of the twin, is not pushed to work much as it is right now. Customers that come and go and have different needs would put the waiter would have a role that feels more like 50%.
Anyhow, long comment for a great entry!