I dont think you really need to change the speed or anything on it, it was just slower as I was reading it out loud. I like seeing people using games as an interactive or even not interactive way to tell a story. To the Moon was such an amazing game (if you can really call it a game). If you havent seen it its a rpg maker type game but you dont really have much to do other than move around to control the flow of the story but its such a good story it just sucks you in. Nice work