I had a weird graphical bug with the game. Basically there was constant black lines running from down to top throughout the game. Seems like a buffer issue? Funnily, it kinda fit the theme of the game and for a while I wasn't sure if it was a bug or intended. But after watching someone else play the game, I can definitely say, it's a bug.
I tried to capture footage of the bug, but surprisingly, it appears normal in the video. considering it seems like a buffer issue anyway, perhaps it's a thing with my drivers or hardware? It seems to work fine with other games, so why not this one? I'm not sure, I'll have to look into it.
Anyway, this is probably an issue with either the game engine or my drivers/hardware than it is with you, so I won't let it affect my ratings.
As for the game itself, I liked the storytelling; but the gameplay was basically non-existent. Perhaps the mechanics were supposed to fit the story, but I just couldn't feel it. Then again, my feedback may not be the most reliable, because I was distracted by the constant black lines running across the screen.
The presentation seemed to be quite nice. I liked the monochrome visuals and the music fit the game well. Nice work!