Interesting ! I feel it would help engagement if you added some more choices along the way. But I understand it might not be easy with the story you're trying to tell.
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Thanks! And yeah - I started out wanting to have more choices ideally, but I was not sure where to put them in the scope of the jam such that I could fully handle them properly and do all the writing for that. So it ended up as-is. XD I'm actually not sure that I can go back and change it without fundamentally changing the experience it shaped up to be at this point, however. I'm leaning towards leaving the writing as-is unless/until I figure out how I could add more choices without muddying the points made. (At least one person has let me know EXACTLY where they wanted a choice but didn't have it haha, so it's something for me to consider carefully.)