No, there is nothing else I would change, I think it's great! If you can make the visibility better while keeping the angle the same that would definitely solve my issue with it. Maybe one very minor thing is you can have the pick-up button also skip the intro, instead of the close button. That didn't catch my eye for a few seconds.
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Well hey that's great to hear!
I'm not exactly sure what you mean, initially I thought you meant that the controls were visible on the party invite screen which made it harder to notice the close button, but they're not.
Do you just mean that the close button should be more obvious? Perhaps it it was moving, so it catches your eye?