I love it so much. Super creative.
Few things:
-Hawke has the most dialogue and "feels" like a person. The others just kind of say what they are.
-When I read through all the characters' FTEs in Chapter 1, they all say what they feel about the "game" and situation they're in. I never really got to know who these people are. I think the FTE dialogue would be better in the Prologue Chapter and have new dialogue for Chapter 1 FTEs that help us get to know these characters.
-I just realized how important sound effects are to convey what the characters are feeling. Just reading the dialogue, is just that. Reading the dialogue. Having sound effects help emphasize what the characters are feeling and saying
-I like how creative when getting each of their alibis. Instead of having to place each characters on a room, just a simple portrait on the side is enough
-Some parts that don't have music are kind of awkward.
-Very creative way to do the execution
I'm super excited for more of your game!
https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLQ4Cc6nMTihv-VJydF8X6JfTeT5Nvo5UT - Played both Prologue and Chapter 1