I love the demo so far! It's an interesting premise and I love your take on the whole superhero concept. The abilities aren't the usual stuff you see and their very clever! I'm especially interested in Voider, I wasn't expecting a POV from them. I'm wondering if they're maybe a possible love interest? Either way seems like we can build an interest relationship with them, and unless I understood incorrectly they knew our real name even though they hadn't seen our face. Matteo is definitely my favourite of the others so far, thank you for letting us spray them. Also Pierce and Eric are amazing. Looking forward for more, good luck with writing!
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Hey Nashyra!
Thank you for the kind words, the mean a lot to me as a budding writer. To answer your question yes Voider is a possible Relationship Option, meaning you can romance, befriend or antagonise them depending on your choices. And during your chase with Voider, you do chase after him unmasked, which I'll be sure to make clearer in a future update.
Once again thank you for reading!
-Ian Lythe