The closeness of love/passion as devouring, coming through beautifully. I am obsessed! Had to listen to Love Crime while reading, it just fit.
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I love the demo so far! It's an interesting premise and I love your take on the whole superhero concept. The abilities aren't the usual stuff you see and their very clever! I'm especially interested in Voider, I wasn't expecting a POV from them. I'm wondering if they're maybe a possible love interest? Either way seems like we can build an interest relationship with them, and unless I understood incorrectly they knew our real name even though they hadn't seen our face. Matteo is definitely my favourite of the others so far, thank you for letting us spray them. Also Pierce and Eric are amazing. Looking forward for more, good luck with writing!