I think the storytelling, camera direction, and Chapter display before it becomes operable is very good. I would like to use it as a reference. I think the color palette should be adjusted, because the color of the bird and the color of the water in the background were very similar. As you can see in the screenshot, I would like to see an animation of the bird flapping its wings.
Viewing post in OSIRIS jam comments
Yes I see now—good point with the colors being similar. I’ll tweak the water so it has more contrast against the player. Wing flapping and additional animations will be introduced once we’re allowed to make changes to our games. There’s so much I want to change already. I’m working on a mini stage between the intro and current water stage. Thank you for the feedback!