Hey! Sure! There are some Spanish writing rules you missed, like that one about not using uppercase for a word after : within the same line of text unless it's a proper name (I noticed that a lot and it made me feel uncomfortable because I'm kind of a maniac with that xD). I noticed a lot of periods within the same paragraph, which is something Spanish writing doesn't use regularly. A few concordance errors in terms of gender/number here and there (VERY few of these), but apart from that, I’m completely IN LOVE with your result and your creativity!! I wish I could give you more than 5 stars for creativity!