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I loved the twist! 10/10

Great to hear! I studied at PUCV too, I even know your teacher, Alejandro. Again, great work!

Hey guys! Even though there are a few things which could be improved in terms of writing style in order to make it sound even better, I loved the twists on stuff like:

Nombre y apariencia

Sabemos que puedes leer. Describe lo que dice el título.

Don't give up and keep creating, you did a great job!

I replied to Carmen, they are mostly common writing problems due to the use of CAT Tools and the fact that they copy the English grammar over to the target text. Apart from that, again, I REALLY, REALLY like your entry. I just have a silly grammar police problem I must deal with in a better way. My bad if I made you feel uncomfortable, please don't.

Hey! Sure! There are some Spanish writing rules you missed, like that one about not using uppercase for a word after : within the same line of text unless it's a proper name (I noticed that a lot and it made me feel uncomfortable because I'm kind of a maniac with that xD). I noticed a lot of periods within the same paragraph, which is something Spanish writing doesn't use regularly. A few concordance errors in terms of gender/number here and there (VERY few of these), but apart from that, I’m completely IN LOVE with your result and your creativity!! I wish I could give you more than 5 stars for creativity!

I loved the creativity! Still, there are several writing mistakes.