You have an interesting concept going on here. I had a feeling the story might have been headed toward something environmental since the people were all hunters and the deer were attacking, but unfortunately I never found out... I think I'd gotten pretty far when three deer ganged up on me despite staying on the path. Once they attack you really have little chance to survive, even with the gun, and having to start all over at the beginning is very frustrating. Also, running into a dead deer hurts you--not sure if this was intentional or not.
That said, I did find what I saw of the story to be compelling, despite a few grammar issues in the text. I like how the story unfolded through the dialogue of the NPCs. I may come back to it and try to finish after playing a few more submissions.
Overall, you've got something interesting here that probably just needs a little balancing and polish. Good job!