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still needs the mc toning down quite a bit, really dislike the way he is, would also like to see sam and ashley become dating material but without the fall out that could possibly occur if ash was to find out he is dating sam etc.  feels like ashley is really into the mc at the end, so i really hope this continues to be honest, she is a lovely girl, and strong enough to put the mc in his place, which would help to tone the lunatic down

I can tell he's focusing on character development heavily still, meaning it will clearly get to a point where the MC will finally begin to calm down a bit mood/attitude wise, but I think we won't see that show up too much until likely another two or three episodes/chapters down the road, which for me, is a logical, fitting and thus good pace for that.

That said, I would like to say to me, I've already noticed a bit of that "toning down" you're referring to across all the characters, actually. It's subtle, and small little bits, but it's definitely present. And to me, again, that's just the right pacing to have for the toning down, specifically of the more intense characters like Ash & MC.

I really like ashley, maybe because i have just been following her story until the last chapter.I was wondering about her twin sister, I thought she would also end up a love interest of the mc.  I just wonder though in which direction this storyline is going to go with the mc. Right now it seems to be that he can hop from girl to girl, but i am wondering if this end up in a full harem, where they can all be together, like 3 some or 4 somes with girls and the mc, or will it be the case the mc can choose whichever he wants to be with depending on how much he has built up his relationship with. I never really liked emily so much, i am definitely more of a ashley and sam fan. It's just that it seems only to be set up relationship wise with emily only.  Will ashley and sam end up with needing the same things ie stat wise as emily?  She just seems like too much work to even bother with if you know what I mean. I really enjoy a good written vn, and its pace is kind of slow at times, which is fine if it fits with the story itself and he can keep the characters under control as i said previously with toning down and improving the way the characters behave and speak to each other, the main character I hope will move out of his manchild mentality, so many vn's suffer with creating a really poor mc. I love to be sucked into a story, but to do that requires immersion, and believable characters, right now the mc is far from believable at least for me.