This was a neat first episode. I liked the common fear of being home alone as a kid. My main critique is to add more build up in the first half. Its a bit slow just doing normal household activities. Add some rustling noises coming from outside. Maybe some shadows in the windows to help create a stronger build to an uneasy atmosphere. The second half was really great. Overall, its a great start and I am looking forward to the other episodes. As Mason said "Your energy."