I fully agree with @hawkbyte . The game is playable and complete-able, the vaguely fantasy-like setting is fine, the starting location is intriguing enough, there are some items that are 'common-sense-coherent', but that's really about it.
The game actually reminds me a little bit of 'The Cave of Magic' which is - in reality - Tutorial A in the Adventuron Text Adventure System.
Now, all is not lost for the creator, but - again agreeing with @hawkbyte - I, too, think they might greatly benefit from migrating to an IF system that integrates standard verbs and more, sensible standard responses.
'Yesternight' is also an interesting name.