The mood and the world setting are really interesting. There were a few hiccups with the code like this error with an undefined variable, though I got through it just by clicking ignore a few times. The story is very introspective with a lot of little details that flesh out the world, and I dig that in a VN. It reminds me of a lot of twine games that deal with similar themes. I also really like that surreal image of the horse legs going on up there in the thread. We love a sixteen-legged horse cloud. Overall I really enjoyed it and would love to see more :>