This is an amazing game and the only complaint that I could possibly come up with is that it isn't longer. Which isn't actually a complaint, obviously.
The sprites are beautifully drawn and they feel... familiar somehow? Not sure where I've seen the sprite artist's work before but it's very distinct and detailed.
The characters are charming too, and I adore them both so much that I can't pick a favorite. Their motives are as believable as their backstories, and everything is so well thought out! It really is just like reading a story but with visuals. Which is the point of a visual novel but I guess what I'm saying is that the story was riveting, and I quite literally tried every single variation of every single option in the game. It's a true testament to the quality of your creation when you can make someone so happy just from finding a single like of unseen text!
Anywho, if you couldn't tell already, I'm a huge fan of your work and I look forward to seeing what you guys make in the future!