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I loved it! Like my grandpappy always said, "Blessed is the love that comes from contempt". (I mean he probably said that I never met the guy)

But seriously, fantastic work! You and your team crafted not only wonderful compelling (and beautifully drawn) characters but also a beautiful story and a lore-rich world and really pleasant and fitting music. I've been playing VNs since I was a kid and a lot of the time, the romance seems really forced. Here, the depictions of intimacy feel realistic and the pacing was really nice. Love it when folks can write about intimate moments without it immediately being physical intimacy, I don't mind a good spicy scene but I think it can get kind of one-note after that.

You put your ENTIRE foot in this, and I can't wait to play anything you have a hand (foot) in next! Thanks so much for all your hard work!! 

Fighting for my life. I went into this thinking it was happy-go-lucky and then BOOM bad end 😭

Great writing though! Before the end of my first run, I felt connected with every character and that made it so much more poignant. I'm nowhere near done with this game yet but it's already in my favorite VN folder. Wonderful game!

SPOILER DO NOT READ IF YOU"RE NOT INTO THAT.

It breaks in the middle, or maybe it's the end? After you do what you did I get an error:

Error: <<print>>: bad evaluation: Unexpected token '<<'

<<print "Your ego shrinks a little."><<elseif $finalStory is "chol">>
Did I do something wrong or is it a path problem? I am loving the experience so far.

I just played through and it was all so charming I just had to go through it again and see all of the dialogue. Everyone is trying their best and they're all so excited, it just breaks my heart. How could anyone be so unkind to people who are the embodiment of purity?? I couldn't even imagine doing that, it'd make me feel like I had kicked a puppy or stolen a baby's bottle or something. I'd feel like a monster (Get it? Because we know Monsters aren't really synonymous with the word "monster"? And they said I couldn't do wordplay).

But seriously, you did an amazing job with this!

I usually don't read summary pages too deeply because they give away too much of the story, but despite that things were apparent once I started playing. Like, I could just tell that something was kind of off with the choices. That something was off with Frisk. Even before a certain choice when talking to Alphys made that clear. You can just tell that although things are looking bright for our heroes, there's something not quite right about it all. A lot of games rely on a kind of Telling-Not-Showing way of story telling, but with this, I wasn't told anything. I uncovered things while playing that lead me to believe something that, after I went looking for confirmation of, were true. And I think it takes really, really good writing to make that happen.

I don't want to spoil anything for anyone just scrolling through the comments but after finished the Demo and was brought to the title screen for the third time, all I could do was put my head in my hands and say, "Oh honey... What have you done?"

Is it weird that the ending made me irrationally sad? I miss Alie tbh which is weird since it usually takes me hours to get invested in a character/person.

Anything that can invoke these feeling in a person is absolutely amazing! Thank you for making this!

This is an amazing game and the only complaint that I could possibly come up with is that it isn't longer. Which isn't actually a complaint, obviously.

The sprites are beautifully drawn and they feel... familiar somehow? Not sure where I've seen the sprite artist's work before but it's very distinct and detailed. 

The characters are charming too, and I adore them both so much that I can't pick a favorite. Their motives are as believable as their backstories, and everything is so well thought out! It really is just like reading a story but with visuals. Which is the point of a visual novel but I guess what I'm saying is that the story was riveting, and I quite literally tried every single variation of every single option in the game. It's a true testament to the quality of your creation when you can make someone so happy just from finding a single like of unseen text!

Anywho, if you couldn't tell already, I'm a huge fan of your work and I look forward to seeing what you guys make in the future! 

I've never read a VN where I loved the characters instantly. I don't want to spoil anything for anyone who hasn't gone through this yet, but I will say that I love your characters. From the Rowdy Ketchup Man to the Quiet Mayo baby, they're all so unique!

And, while I'm here, it took me longer than I'd like to admit to realize that Piper is supposed to be Pepper. I think it was even outright stated once and I still didn't get it!

Anyway, long story short, I love this and will be waiting with bated breath for the full version! Keep up the amazing work!

Okay then the issue is that I can't seem to play the game at all? I get the main menu and I can configure everything but as soon as my mouse comes close to the "apply" button, the game runs into a code error and I'm not sure what to do to fix it. I have a windows computer, if that helps.

Hi! Your game looks really cool, but I can't seem to actually play? Where do I report problems?

I really liked this. It wasn't especially cutesy, and there is a lack of good text adventures recently. It kinda feels like a lost art, but you did it justice. 10/10

Hello, I just downloaded your game because it looked interesting and I have been obsessed with it ever since. I have played many of these kinds o games in the past, but never have I been drawn in to any of the others like i was to Queen's Crown. I actually felt like I was personally responsible for the kingdom and it's inhabitants and it kind of hurt when I had to deal with them harshly. I remember when I found out about what she had done, I think I felt physical pain, and trust me when I say I don't invest myself in these games easily.

Now, I could go on for years about how much I love the suitors, but I'll spare you and tell you only what I liked about them. Emry felt like the usual childhood friend type and I wanted to know what he hid behind his stoic outer appearance. Then, their was mister angry redhead, who made me so angry I wanted to reach through the screen and hit him. But, he obviously had ulterior motives and that made curious. Lastly, there was him. I can't explain how hopelessly I adored Noah when I first saw him. I think it was his eyes in contrast to everything else on him that drew me in initially then I fell for his snarky attitude and untraditional charm.

They all seem to have their own agenda, and I really want to find out what it is. The way you did choices in this game was amazing because of how much weight was put into every choice you make. The writing was great as well and I found maybe one error? I don't even think I can call it an error however, more like an accident since you wrote a word twice. The characters are all well drawn and their appearances fit their personalities well.

I'm running out of ways to tell you how highly I think of your game, so I think I'll end it here. I hardly ever buy visual novels, I always think, "What if the game is awful? Then, It'd have been a waste of money."

But, I might actually buy this. I just hope that you start funding soon because I really don't want to forget about this game, not to rush you or anything. Well, that's all. Thank you so much for all the hard work you have put into this project and know that you will have my support while you are developing. Bye!