It was a click for me when i had the idea and im sad you could not finish it but it was pretty hard and frustrating sometimes... i will fix a lot of the issues and post again when we can, i think my story was really cool and i bet you would have enjoyed it. :) About the jump, yeah it was a mistake, it was better but me trying to make it unique ruined it a bit. But thank you a lot for giving it a chance and for the feed back.