As others mentioned I also died a few times on the first scene and reading back the entire dialog was a bit boring.. Anyhow this is a really cool little game! The story kept me playing! It talks to me as I were severely injured 4 years ago and spent 3 months at the hospital. When I woke up I forgot a lot of things but hopefully memories came back days after days. So yeah I personally got into the story and quite enjoyed it!
Really great pixel art and animations too - which wasn't necessarily what I expected seeing the thumbnail at first. You should probably showcase more your art on the page to attract players because your game deserves some attention.
That said thank you very much for this cool entry! ^^