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Awwwww. February's so sweet! Wish more people like him existed lol. Now I'm too scared to see if there's a bad end haha. If you plan on doing any more work on this, having better transitions (the cafe scene to uni scene was a bit abrupt) would make the experience better. I would of course like more story, but short and sweet has its own charm so it's fine if you keep it this way.

If not, then good luck on other submissions! I like your character art. It's a nice 'warm' style. Perfect for this story, really.

Hi! I know how you feel about bad ends, haha. I try to avoid them but if they exist, I can’t help but want to know what happens. Mint and Honey doesn’t have any bad ends though, it’s a linear story with just one ending. Working on this really made me realize how weak I am when it comes to writing, so I do agree with you that my transitions need work, thank you for the feedback! I hope you enjoyed it!