Your game has an awesome story I love that you put so much conversation in it. I had some problems mastering the controlls but that was no problem because you dont have to play the entire game from the start when you lose otherwhise i would have some problems finishing the game. i would love if you work on it after the gamejam and make it even bigger because it has so much potential. For a game jam game the lenght was very good the game has a good amount of content. Music and other audio that is used is perfect and makes up for a great atmosphere. The graphics are beautiful. I dont have much critic for your entry at first i thought the theme wasnt implemented very well but as i think bout it the whole game is about finding that one speial room so it is fitting and a more creative use of the theme than a lot of other entries.
Best of luck for the final results i did the best i can to help this cool game getting a nice placement as i gave it a very good rating.