Yeah, the head injuries... Still, almost all characters find an opportunity to mention how slow it goes up there for him (oddly enough, his sister mentioned in one flash back that he used to read a lot before pumping iron...) ... and some dialogues drag a bit because of his slow grasping of the situation... Naivete and intelligence are a bit different right? :) ... But I am glad to hear about hi future IQ improvements ^^
What about the culture shock though ? I thought your choices would lead to a more open minded approach of sexuality, but his inhibitions still seem to endure...