That was a nice experience :] The athmosphere is amazing and the music compliments that. I loved the character designs they look like shadows with orange eyes :D Also the jornual is a great addition the fact that you can take notes is cool too :D
My feedback would be the text speed :/ it is really slow for a dialog based game. You should implement text skipping or faster text speed. Also the camera feels a bit off whenever i stop when going down the camera goes up fastly.
Other than these i think you did an amazing job. Listening to characters stories and helping them was fun loved it great work :D