Considering there's only 8 submissions, just that you managed to finish on time with all that you had going on is commendable! I downloaded your game and played it twice but I lost both times lol (is that the intended outcome?). The story was ok though a little confusing. It was hard to tell at some points who the speech bubbles belonged to. But I liked that you some interactivity but I think a little music or sfx would have been cool :) cheers!
thanks for the reply. Actually, whatever you do, it will be wrong because, you may have guessed, error!!! and the speetch bubbles belongs to the software I developed. You may neve understand that there is a sprite when you play it! Anyway, thanks for the encouragement and I'll do my best. Infact, I'm still studying both unity and gms2! Let's see
sincearly,
Mr.StiK