Good entry. I thought the story was excellent. I enjoyed the writing a lot and I found myself playing for longer than I had given myself for the ratings. That being said I did not complete it. It is too long for a jam that has such a short window to rate and so many games submitted. That's no criticism of what you have done, more just the reality of how I am meeting it for the first time.
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Oh that's perfectly fair, there are a lot of entries to look at, the general idea was to try and create what felt like a relatively sizable game (by the development time standards) but you can get a measure of it without finishing. About half the King's section was cut, so it might have ended up bigger still if I'd had a few more free hours, haha.
I'm glad the story pulled you in, as that's what we were going for most.