Nice use of solid backgrounds! I too had trouble keeping up with some of the repetition, but I liked the story still. The transitions at the end could be shorter (and skippable?). I tried to download this, but windows wouldn't let me run it for some reason. The browser version worked well though.
Thank you for the comment! I tried to prolong the ending to match the ending of the song, but I guess so far most people are telling me that makes the ending too long. They're fine with the first play through, but with the second, they get annoyed. I think I will try to add a persistent variable that makes the ending skippable when I get more time to work on this. I will also add some choices. Again thank you for the comment!