I really like the whole concept of it. Definitely worth everyone's time. The one thing that I found quite lacking was that how their relationship progress almost seems a bit forced. I don't know, maybe am just a fan of poetic writing and slow burners, but regardless, it was amazing. Looking forward to your other works :p
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Thank you! The fast progress was something that bothered me the most when writing the story too. Because of the story concept, there isn't much time to develop the relationship. I tried my best to pad it up and added more CGs than originally planned because of that.
In the end, it was just the beginning of their relationship. I hoped it to looks like two guys go to a blind date and immediately hit it of (a little too fast )
I'll try harder in my next game. Thank you for playing! :)