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I really enjoyed this experience. The writting is great and there is a lot of polish here. If I had to be critical, the fact that the game requires looping through the text multiple times exposed the limitations of the way the text emerged. At first I really liked the way it tracked, until I had to read lots or try and click on and option. I quickly waited until it was in in full until I read or clicked anything. Whilst it seemed like a good idea at first it became an obsticle pretty quickly. If a work moves you are not going to read it quickly. I would make the formating more regular. The writting is good enought not to need anything fancy doing with it. I really liked the highlighted word conversation system. Simple but much nicer than a drop down list of options. Only bug I spoted is the interactive words flash something of the formating that I assume is to do with making them buttons but it was a shame to break the spell like that. I am sure its a quick enough fix. Solid entry