Hi, I just tried out your game. First off, I like your title screen and logo, it looks super nice. I think your music choice was solid as well and I thought the premise of your game was interesting enough.
However, there's a lot of typos and grammar issues with your text. I realize you're not an native English speaker, so I would suggest you have someone proofread your game. My next big problem was that I couldn't always follow who was talking and that happened like 50% of the time. (I would suggest adding faces or names to fix this.) Due to all of that I had no idea what I needed to do after the intro, so I just walked around and talked to everyone.
The dungeons are very confusing and I actually ended up skipping a lot of the bridges and going almost straight to the "final" bridge with the level 50 heroes. Since I was coming from the wrong way, each and everytime I saw a bridge cutscene the player was facing the wrong. Anyway, I did reach the door, that was asking for crystals, but I didn't have any, nor did I have any idea how to get one. I went back to the beginning and interacted with a crystal there and while it gave me a text, the crystal still remained, so I assumed that's not what I'm supposed to do? This is the point that I quit.
I did find some other bugs:
- Your logo is cut off from the title screen. As a minor note, you should probably have deleted your save before packaging the game.
- Passability issues: I could walk on bushes, rocks and crates. I can also walk up and down the heighted bridge at some points.
- The player retains his direction upon transfer, which means the player sometimes faces a wall or the exit, instead of the actual path of the map.
- There's one map where you use the Visustella tiles that you don't use the border top of the mountain tiles. That looks off.
- So about the Visustella tiles: they don't allow commercial usage, and the jam rules state you're only allowed to use resources that do allow commercial usage.
I do want to end this by saying that making a game in a month is no small feat, so congratulations on that.