Really great first attempt at a game jam submission, well done! This game has a lot of potential, the art style is strong and full of character, I think with more time and more experience developing jam games you could make a really fantastic game. Keep it up, stay creative and well done!
One small niggle was the lack of explanation when it came to the star rating system, I would have really enjoyed knowing why I was being rated as I was and how I could improve for the days ahead.