So, ran through this game. Your names might want to have some sanitization so that people don't do crazy things like my /V[1] their name.
I assume you used some form of automatic wrapping. The wrapper is too wide so it cuts off some words.
During the hallway walk, you can block the characters and they just stop moving.
After the area is altered, while in that first map, the tower has a minor layering issue.
Seems really odd that they would put grass (usually flammable) right next to lava.
Some areas have weird passability.
Very short, I finished it in about 14-15 minutes without really rushing things.
One of the exits says to talk to Masa even after talking to Masa?
The adventure game style is kind of a nice change and it seems like all the battles are events.