It's a really cool concept. I'm very intrigued by the story and world that you've created. I like the whole steampunk aesthetic and the fonts fit really well with that. The voice over is such a cool addition! It was just a little bit soft compared to the music when the game started.
I was able to jump onto the first platform once but then after I died I just couldn't get onto it again, so I sadly couldn't play the whole game. I even restarted the game but had the same issue. I'm not sure if maybe I'm doing something wrong or missing something, but if that's the case I'll definitely give it another go. Another issue I had was that the pause menu buttons didn't seem to work.
The shadows were a little uncomfortable to look at but otherwise the game looks super impressive. I really like all the detail that was put in and I really appreciate that the player can see part of the character model when looking down and sprinting - a really nice touch. From what I experienced, the mechanics work really well and the automatic targeting is really interesting.
Well done!
Erin Hutton - Team Lactose Intolerance