Re-upload of my comment. My apology, I just realized that the video I uploaded has it's audio muffled because of my mistake setting the audio bit to 320 instead of 320k bit. I'm sorry if you feel excited to see someone playing your game but then see it's just a quiet video and feeling disappointed.
Anyway, it's a good demo. The sprites little movement are a nice touch. The zooming and moving of the screen shows a good understanding of how to play a scene and make it dramatic.
The only problem would be the text which is hard for me to read.
Once again my apology.