Sorry for the late reply, but thank you so much for playing!
Will definitely do something about the text;;
I actually agree that it didn't end in a way that would get people to want to continue reading, so I'm really glad you mentioned it haha;; I actually had something else planned for the end of the demo (which I hope to add in a later update)
Also glad you enjoyed the animations, hearing people like it made it worth the effort ^o^