I'm feeling this one. I love me some weird west and your system is unique and seems fun. Only complaint I have is the format of the document itself--specifically that table at the bottom of the first page. I know we're cramped for space but consider using columns or something because the lack of space between the two sides of that table definitely made it a nightmare to read through there. The idea is fantastic and I definitely think this could be something special.
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I'm not even close to being a graphic designer. What I do is compare my layout to the layouts of similar games--in a one page or two page I look to Lasers and Feelings primarily but any ttrpg could work--and ask myself if it flows or looks at least comparably to that game. If not, I try to fix the issues keeping it from looking right. Like, alternating the fill color on each row of a table or adding a column to separate them then removing the lines for a smoother look, etc.