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Excellent update! This game deserves more exposure!
My only feedback is to review the branching pathways. For instance, if you tell Ned that you are not a couple after doing enough activities with him but not kissing him, he will still say that you kissed when confronting Vincent. I noticed several instances where the dialogue directly contradicts your plot choices...which leads me to my next point...
The reason why I explored these weird pathways is because the 1 on 1 with Ron is too hard to get. I think I have tried all the most logical routes and failed to get anything more than hugging in bed. I even got Ron's relationship score all the way to over 15.