Thanks so much for the detailed and constructive criticisms!
I completely agree with everything you pointed out, especially the camera and difficulty criticisms. I have to admit when I ran out of time I used the difficulty of the level design as well as the artificial difficulty imposed by the fixed camera to get closer to my goal of a single hole of mini-golf with a very high par.
I also appreciate the feedback on presentation such as font and cover design. Definitely things I will try to put more energy into in future Jams. :)