Okay I tried just running in compatibility mode with Windows 8, at my computer's own recommendation and it seems to have stopped any random crash to desktop. Either that, or I got lucky.
Either way, as I said before, there is certainly a lot of strong potential here! As mentioned earlier, the new camera view really helps with seeing both players. And the text just stating what comes off for the player is also nice.
Right now I'd say the weakest point is still the dialogue, as it seems to just follow a set path for the Blonde Girl, and just a small random pool for her winning. But the fact there is dialogue at all, I think means there will be an improvement here.
As a question, I wonder if we could still get scenes even if you lose? Her dialogue if she wins seems a bit odd, since it seems to be she thinks she lost last time or something... still, I'm looking forward to more!