I was really excited for this since you're using 3d models that GENUINELY look like the characters. Not to mention there's really no My Hero Academia porn games.
And then, I was greeted with HORRIBLE grammar. Like, BAD.
Cant you hire a writer or something? I figure English isn't your first language.
Hell, I'd help you with the writing. This has really great potential and I'd hate to see it go to waste
There's also quite a few things that are a little annoying, like the grinding to get the beach event, the generic "sexy" music that plays on loop FOREVER, and I got a crash when I chose to sit next to ochaco.
Also the "real look" for the invisible girl is terrifying looking and a huge immersion breaker, jeez you can give her a body but remove the head at least, its style is completely different from the MHA characters and it looks like it was used with different tools entirely. (Which it was)
I saw the two others too, the girl at the park and the one at the beach, why did you add them???? That SO breaks the immersion and the ONLY characters that have animated scenes aren't even MHA ones?? What's the point??
Please just STICK with MHA specific characters, you already have their models and stuff. Don't waste your time with random non-mha side characters, that's borderline false advertising.
Criticisms aside,
I'm looking forward to the more variety in actions you can do with the girls, like groping their ass and stuff.
Visual novels normally don't have that, they kinda just lock you into specific scenes without free-will. I hope you also implement options for sex positions and such.